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Mikhael
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Location: Minnesota

Face

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Staring at her expression
It is strange and in question
Looking so inane
You could be in pain
Yet this face my obsession
Let me take you down cuz I'm going to.. strawberry fields.. nothing is real..

When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace-- Jimi Hendrix
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Gothic Queen

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Post by Gothic Queen »

I like this a lot :)
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Rynn Aethelraed

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Post by Rynn Aethelraed »

What an incredibly profound attraction. The word "obsession" captures the essence of the entire poem and communicates the intensity. Well done.
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