*~Bre's poems~*

[ladybre]

Blood

My blood is what i feel
Its what i taste
Its what i am
When i bleed
I can not feel
I can not be
Who i am
What i am
Can not be seen
Can not be felt
Can not be understood
Can not be
I am my blood

Love’s not me

For if hte one that you love
Love’s not you
What would you do
Would you
Scream and whell
Hurt and bleed
Cry
I would die
I would not beleive
I would not understand
Why not
Why not love me
But to love someone else
I can not see
How enyone can do this to me…

No more life

To no longer live
To die
To be no more
To take your life
Is not linving
Its dieing
Its to be no more
People think to much about life
But to take yout life
Means that your life
Is death
Is no more
Is no longer
And that you no longer
Live
No more life.


Darkness

My wourl is dark
My life is black
My love is gray
My happiness is my blood
My fear is my reflection
I fear in myself…
…of what i am …
…of what i have become…
…..Myself…..
…..Darkness….

[angela]

I like it. Most of my poems are sad never happy or lovy dovy. I think we need the dark ones every once in a while to remind us of the other side of things.

[ladybre]

Thanks i was just writing what i fell i was very sad and mad soo thanks

[5moons]

i like your poems. They are simple and tell you what you are feeling without drawing it out.

[ladybre]

Thanks you i was very sad and very unhappy and i showed them to other people and they sayed that it was scary so i never showed anyone else tell now and thanks to you guys i am writing more now

[5moons]

Thanks you i was very sad and very unhappy and i showed them to other people and they sayed that it was scary so i never showed anyone else tell now and thanks to you guys i am writing more now

Write more post more I like reading others poems.

[ladybre]

Thanks i will i'll do some more at school today thanks for reading my poems i thot that they were diferent that any other peoms thati know so i thot other people would like them well i'll try to add more today ore tomorow Holla!!!1

[darkestlight*]

I really like your poems..I just love the way you use words...hope you post some more....please..lol!

[ladybre]

I'll post some as soon as I can ..Sorry about the delay I wrote a lot more