Lifely. One word that describes the force
Inside of those who dance with roses by the lake
Majestic still, much like a horse
And their loveliness is all your heart can take
The love these beings have is simply amazing
They do not discriminate their love
Much of their actions leave my heart racing
My little Plum, as graceful as a dove.
This is a poem to a being me and another have created named Plum.
My ode to Plum
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You are red and I am blue. My favorite color is purple. Unless I miss my guess.
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The blending of people in a relationship or aspects of something in a way that is pleasing and balanced.
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Re: My ode to Plum
And a very nice figurative description of your "created being" it is.tutmosis wrote:...This is a poem to a being me and another have created named Plum.
The back-and-forth between the plural and singular in your pronoun V. proper noun usage is an interesting feature.
Constructively, while it's true that simile and rhyme are terrific poetic devices in and of themselves, many have found that they tend to reach their greatest potential when used in conjunction with certain other guidelines (such as 'continuity' and 'meter').
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