what do you think of this spell

[Lucy720]

ok i am not sure wether to call it a blessing or and protection spell but plz tell me what you think of it
It is the first spell that i have wrote sorry if it not very good

Let air brush your face like that of a lover
Fire streghen your bones
Water wash away you fear
Earth guide you home

Sprite fill with protection
in moon
in sun
in stars

Plz tell me what you think
Lucy
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[AutumnMaidens]

It sounds like a chant/song, it could be a blessing for a friend/lover who needs to travel. Blessing them that they will return home safely.

It's lovely

Bless