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A life long lost, a family I adore
oh this pain I cannot ignore
I push the needle into my skin
you couldn't even comprehend

As the blood pulls into the plunger
making me feel as no other

I push it in
try to pretend
I'm inferior to all Men

I'm hypnotized under it's [sic] spell
I don't feel anything now

Heart slows down
arms go limp
how can I enjoy this shit

Eyes roll back, realize this could be my last blast

Grasp for air
my end is near
how the hell did end up hear [sic]


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I found your poem and put it back on the board. Hope that's okay. I think it's good.

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Why was this dug up out of the grave?

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Starwitch liked it.
Is red stamped mail the title? Or is it a movement of some kind,?... like to help families who have lost someone to that viscous drug?
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Why did it go to the graveyard in the first place?

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only the Mod who moved it can answer that. It twern't I.
Removal of content is at the discretion of individual mod. Sometimes we talk about it to see if it can edited and replaced, in this case Star made an executive decision.
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