Shakespearean sonnet

[DaughterofErebus]

I look into your eyes and see beauty
Your warm eyes show me how you really love me
You look at me and call me a cutie
And you tell me how you want us to be

Say that our love will never retire
You don't have to say anything because
your eyes tell me what you desire
Our love will be everthing to cause

I couldn't stop blushing on the way home
What a beautiful romance we have dad
he gives me chills, down deep to every bone
look at us and say our love is bad?

Did you know our love is enchanted
like a wish or spell that you have granted

Pleaz tell me what you think I wrote it my freshman year of high school :type: