...I love you...
Shhh, don't say anything yet,
I need you to hear this...
It doesn't matter what you've done wrong,
I've done worse,
It doesn't matter how crazy you are,
Ill share the insanity for another brush of our skin,
Shhh, my love, please... another moment to speak...
I... I can't word it, simply, I love you...
When I'm not with you, my flesh burns, yearns...
Look at me shaking as we speak...
...you are my flesh, be a part of me.
My love, my dear... I am yours, yours in life, and in death.
If only you can see, I'm here for you now and forever.
I alone will hold you through the terrors, I will hold you when your minds fever envelops you.
I would dry your tears with my kiss, and my touch would burn the poison from your blood...
Your fight will be my fight, my dear I will spill my blood to fight back the creatures lurking...
I! I... will give what I have, more, be it through blood, or tears, the breaking of my back, or the shattering of my mind, I am yours tonight... and forever more...
-Shaman of Bliss
My love
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It's a nice poem, likable and true and all that jazz
Though, It feels incomplete? even though the ending is rather definite with the "forvermore" it leaves a lot the imagination of the reader. Which I think is rather excellent because it can be very difficult to complete a story with an ending, and keep it going at the same time
that aside you know my thoughts.
Though, It feels incomplete? even though the ending is rather definite with the "forvermore" it leaves a lot the imagination of the reader. Which I think is rather excellent because it can be very difficult to complete a story with an ending, and keep it going at the same time
that aside you know my thoughts.
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