My ode to Plum

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My ode to Plum

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Lifely. One word that describes the force

Inside of those who dance with roses by the lake

Majestic still, much like a horse

And their loveliness is all your heart can take

The love these beings have is simply amazing

They do not discriminate their love

Much of their actions leave my heart racing

My little Plum, as graceful as a dove.



This is a poem to a being me and another have created named Plum. :)
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You are red and I am blue. My favorite color is purple. Unless I miss my guess.
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The blending of people in a relationship or aspects of something in a way that is pleasing and balanced.
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tutmosis wrote:...This is a poem to a being me and another have created named Plum. :)
And a very nice figurative description of your "created being" it is. ;)

The back-and-forth between the plural and singular in your pronoun V. proper noun usage is an interesting feature.

Constructively, while it's true that simile and rhyme are terrific poetic devices in and of themselves, many have found that they tend to reach their greatest potential when used in conjunction with certain other guidelines (such as 'continuity' and 'meter').
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